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Reply Wed 3 Oct, 2007 09:11 am
Tip of the Iceberg

You think you see me but you look right through me
On the out I'm nothing that you think I should be
Dressin' ghetto but the kids really scene
My outsides match my past when I use to sell weed
But you cant ******* imagine cause
All you see is the tip of the iceberg

I'm surrounded by all these immature bitches
Gotta keep my eyes open for those backstabbin' snitches
Its fucked up when I dream cause of xannax bars
And nothing matters look at the scars
Inflicted on myself when I was fucked harder than SARS
Sometimes I catch myself day dreaming away the pain
Stick a ******* needle in my arm and escape from the pain
And honestly bitch you cant understand cause
All you see is the tip of the iceberg

The names Vince King if you don't know it better learn it
Cause I'm one of a kind no one ******* comes close
Run up on me you best not cause I'll shank your bitch ass
Don't believe me try me my mind aint stable
Learn to record my thoughts
Make a horror movie not fit to be bought
And still trick all you see is only the tip of the iceberg

Some people just need em, drugs that is
Only thing that can make happy, drugs aint sin
They just help me feel whats under the waters
Of the tip of the iceberg

So **** you you goddamn bitch you mother ******* hoe
Why you make me feel guilty for being on that dro
Weed aint ever killed nobody but I'll stay away from that snow
I promise cause that **** will knock my ass right off of
The tip of the iceberg

And you will never understand cause you cant think this deep
And I never stop smoking till I reach my peak
But maybe I want something more than sippin that lean
Get a real nice girl who loves me to **** whats between
Her two thighs and right next to her booty
But also wouldn't mind not doing a thing
Cept cuddling up on the couch hugging and kissing

OH **** I cant deal with being so alone
How the ******* hell is this place keeping me clean
When all I want now is to drop some acid and smoke a pound of that green

Im done now always feeling depressed as fuckk
So im gonna take the pain away
And let the blood drip drop then flow down
The tip of my mother ******* iceberg










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contrex
 
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Reply Wed 3 Oct, 2007 10:43 am
Very bad dreary misogynist rubbish from (probably) a 14 year old white college kid who thinks he's a rapper.
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garth809
 
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Reply Thu 4 Oct, 2007 09:33 pm
Well? It's not my type of writing. Is that meant to be rapped or is it soley a writtin peice. But each is there own. If you enjoyed writing it and you like it, then who am i to tell you i don;t . keep it up.
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