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'Still Single After All These Years'

 
 
jjorge
 
Reply Fri 17 Aug, 2007 12:36 am

'Still Single After All These Years'



No great career or monuments,
a dull and simple life,
inconsequentially I've lived
(no doubt for lack of wife!)


Oh, I've known women, had my woes,
but I run away from joining,
for this I took their many blows
(In fact a few this morning!)


from women scorned and weepy
who wanted to be joined
from lovely ones, --and creepy--
whose feelings I'd purloined,


I've battled to stay free you see
till my brow's a sea of creases,
but as my little life expires
and spirit flesh releases


I take the blows I have to take
--their fury's never ceased--
but there's one claim I proudly make:

I'm lashed, but I'm not leashed.
-jjorge
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Letty
 
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Reply Fri 17 Aug, 2007 03:13 am
jjorge, Welcome back, and your poem was delightful. Gave me a real smile this morning. Especially like the last line, "I'm lashed, but I'm not leashed."
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jjorge
 
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Reply Fri 17 Aug, 2007 05:55 am
Hi Letty!

Nice to see you! Hope you are well and happy.

I've been fooling around with a little light verse lately, and having a lot of fun doing it.

last night I visited A2k for the first time in several months at least.
It was nice to see that so many of my favorite people are still here.

Even though I'm a 'web wanderer', I still think of A2k as home.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Fri 17 Aug, 2007 06:01 am
jjorge
I always look forward to your visits and am always charmed by your poems. What a pleasure to find this thread the moment I logged on.
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msolga
 
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Reply Fri 17 Aug, 2007 06:08 am
jjorge! Surprised

Where on earth have you been for so long?

Lovely to see you again! Very Happy
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Noddy24
 
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Reply Fri 17 Aug, 2007 08:00 am
Jjeorge--

Welcome home.
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Fri 17 Aug, 2007 08:26 am
A spirited poem, jjorge! Welcome back.

I was just thinking of you the other day when I was read Dagmaraka's Mayakovsky thread (http://www.able2know.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=101596&start=0) because I remember you and the russian driver ebulliantly talking about russian poetry in the taxi filled with A2kers in San Francisco a few years ago.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Fri 17 Aug, 2007 11:24 pm
Hi Letty! if i can make you smile that's terrific. Nice to see you!

Hello Edgar my friend! It's nice to see your smiling face too ( well, your grille and front bumper anyway)
I see you still have your 'Spontaneous Poetry' thread going. I'll be dropping by to read some.


Ah msolga! seeing you makes me almost happy enough to take a bite...

...of vegemite

(but not quite!) :-)


and Noddy's here!
My dear, is it still your opinion
...that I should hold my dominion? :-)


and our old friend osso from ABQ
How do you do you do!

NICE TO SEE YOU ALL!!
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Amigo
 
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Reply Fri 17 Aug, 2007 11:45 pm
Great poem.
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dagmaraka
 
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Reply Sat 18 Aug, 2007 02:10 am
hey, jjorge! as long as you're not leashed! or something. enjoyed your poem.
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Noddy24
 
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Reply Sat 18 Aug, 2007 03:31 pm
Quote:
My dear, is it still your opinion
...that I should hold my dominion?


Absolutely. You hold it so well.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Sun 19 Aug, 2007 09:48 am
hola amigo!

Como estas'?

Mira, hombre. Explicame una cosa. Como puede ser que has estado miembro para dos anos y todavia te llaman, 'Newbie'?

Pues, ojala' que nos encontramos aqui' mas en el futuro!

Hasta luego, jjorge


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Ahoj dagmaraka!

Ako sa mate?

Tak, ty radost' moj básen!

d'akujem!

ty círy inteligentný!

Mate dnes vecer nejaky program?

podme si nieco vypit.

okamih, prosim....

boli ma hlaua

pretože

nejaký slovák byt tažký

nerozumien ani slovo

cau! -jjorge
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dagmaraka
 
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Reply Sun 19 Aug, 2007 09:57 am
jjorge wrote:
hola amigo!

Como estas'?

Mira, hombre. Explicame una cosa. Como puede ser que has estado miembro para dos anos y todavia te llaman, 'Newbie'?

Pues, ojala' que nos encontramos aqui' mas en el futuro!

Hasta luego, jjorge


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Ahoj dagmaraka!

Ako sa mate?

Tak, ty radost' moj básen!

d'akujem!

ty círy inteligentný!

Mate dnes vecer nejaky program?

podme si nieco vypit.

okamih, prosim....

boli ma hlaua

pretože

nejaký slovák byt tažký

nerozumien ani slovo

cau! -jjorge


Laughing Ahoj jjorge,

Mám sa fajn, dnes večer ale budem musieť pracovat, lebo som celý týždeň preprokrastinovala.

A ty? Ako je v Providence? Chýba mi, rada som tam chodila. Nuž ale čo sa dá robiť, c'est la vie!

In other words, I'm more or less ok. Glad to see you back here! What's new with you?

Do skorého videnia,

Dáša.
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dagmaraka
 
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Reply Sun 19 Aug, 2007 09:57 am
ooops, it didn't like the accents.
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Sun 19 Aug, 2007 10:19 am
Ah, I meant -

http://www.able2know.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=101596&start=0
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dagmaraka
 
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Reply Sun 19 Aug, 2007 10:54 am
ooh, russian poetry lover! feel free to post there others, not just mayakovsky. i'll read along.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Sun 19 Aug, 2007 07:48 pm
dagmaraka


oh, oh! I guess that wasn't such a good idea to look up a few Slovak words and phrases.

I should have figured it would elicit a reply in Slovak!

The only thing I discern is 'Providence'

Nope... I don't live there any more.

I moved last year to Floyd County Virginia in the Blue Ridge Mountains.

I'm a little pressed for time tonight but will visit your poetry thread in the next few days. It looks interesting.

As far as Russian poets are concerned, I am really only familiar with Anna Akhmatova.

After reading a couple of her poems (in translation) in an anthology a few years ago, I bought a volume of her poems selected and translated by Lyn Coffin with an introduction by Joseph Brodsky (actually, I've read a few of his poems too.)
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dagmaraka
 
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Reply Sun 19 Aug, 2007 07:51 pm
Oh she's good. You might also like Marina Cvetajeva (ok, that would be Slovak spelling...gotta look her up in English).
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