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I Feel You

 
 
Reply Sat 4 Aug, 2007 08:23 pm
My bitter heart, let it bleed
Let it die inside me
Drop of hand, drop of blood
Drop of poison in my cup

Kiss my wound, hold my heart
Warm my blood, release the clot

I want you
I need you
Suddenly I feel you again

Full of life, full of love
I'm a diamond in the rough
Open sky, light my way
Guide my heart cause I can't stay

Kiss my wound, hold my heart
Warm my blood, release the clot

I want you
I need you
Suddenly I feel you again

Touch my soul, watch it leave
Watch it die inside me
Drop of hand, drop of blood
Drop of poison in my cup

I want you
I need you
Suddenly I feel you again
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Reply Sun 12 Aug, 2007 04:27 am
Wow!!! I really like that!
That was excellent!!! Very Happy
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