Thu 3 Jan, 2008 07:39 pm - It made me while when I told the man behind the food-counter in the train to have a nice day, sincerely, and he looked me in the eyes and smiled and thanked me, warmly. He had been a robot until... (view)
Thu 3 Jan, 2008 07:26 pm - I like this one quite a lot.
It's very brief, yet it says a lot and actually does give a mental image, even though so short. (view)
Thu 3 Jan, 2008 07:04 pm - Oh Jesus.
Yes, that certainly is amusing.
I'm out of here then. Thank you and cheers.
I don't know if that book will ever get out.... but I will try! (view)
Thu 3 Jan, 2008 06:57 pm - I'm missing it.... Perhaps it's because I'm tired.
It may also be because I don't like to read that story, so I usually go through it rather fast. I see several grammatical... (view)
Thu 3 Jan, 2008 06:46 pm - Again, Thank you!!!
I'm considering the plot of a book that's about to become a work in progress. I think it's good to get some feedback on the things I've already... (view)
Thu 3 Jan, 2008 06:44 pm - Thank you! I'm a little bit fed up with these stories... I've written them and simply don't want to read them. That's why the typos are there, sorry about that! :oops:... (view)
Thu 3 Jan, 2008 06:38 pm - As I said, this is not quite edited to my standard.... I'm having a hard time reading it. Perhaps I can get some feedback to get me started again with it?? Thanks! I'm not sure of the... (view)
Thu 3 Jan, 2008 06:33 pm - A moonlit night, the sea is smooth as the ship sails lightly across the brine.
Its destination, a land slowly appearing through the haze of shimmering waves.
A young sailor stands atop the bow... (view)
Thu 3 Jan, 2008 06:24 pm - "I wanted to be close to him,
He was so lost inside of himself.
He put up walls so high and strong
I never really knew him."
There were eyes on the back of her neck. The music... (view)
