Mon 2 Mar, 2015 07:20 pm - Hi! We are supposed to write a paragraph on the symbolism we see in a photo she gave us of a sunset (the photo should be described well in the paragraph if I've done my job right). Here's... (view)
Sun 28 Sep, 2014 05:49 pm - It's a choice whether or not it's there, but you need to be consistent. I like having the comma because it reduces confusion in some situations (My favorite foods are apples, chocolate... (view)
Fri 20 Jun, 2014 10:21 pm - Like many other teenage girls, I am starting to become curious about make up. (I don't want the whole natural beauty talk, so please save it. Thanks!) I'm worried about disappointing my... (view)
Sun 8 Jun, 2014 06:52 pm - Hi!
Evidence of brain pathology. ("In" would work if you found evidence in the brain pathology department of a college or something, but you would need more context there, and... (view)
Sun 8 Jun, 2014 06:35 pm - Hi!
"Are you okay?" he asked.
"Sorry, I just wanted to help." (I would start a new paragraph here if I was you, but you're fine either way, I think) He raised his hands.... (view)
Sun 13 Apr, 2014 04:48 pm - [quote]I think that one would be extremely valuable for finding out how language really works, Mika.[/quote]
Oh, really? So I don't know how language really works? I have acknowledged several... (view)
Sat 12 Apr, 2014 11:51 am - They're all grammatical (though, in the third one, follow sounds a bit strange), but I would say "What do you want to do/be after you graduate?". I think it sounds more natural. (view)
Sat 12 Apr, 2014 11:43 am - [quote]'Kosher' to mean "acceptable" in such a sentence might be slightly offensive to observant Jews.[/quote]
The term "jews" may be offensive to jewish people. (view)
Sat 12 Apr, 2014 11:41 am - I always am unsure what to do when I write sentences like the one you gave. I would just try to avoid it by saying "Mostly the running around, and scheduling viewings around my schedule and... (view)
