Fri 13 Dec, 2013 10:55 am - thank you very much roger, I very appreciate that you helped me. :) Sad thing is I have sent it this afternoon since I don't have much time left :( (view)
Thu 12 Dec, 2013 10:19 pm - I have always been interested in the business world. I am choosing Hong Kong to further my study because my family is doing business with locals here. Since young, I always loved to help my parents... (view)
Thu 12 Dec, 2013 09:46 pm - Thank you very much for your help. I really appreciate it :)
Here's the latest update :)
I have always been interested in the business world. I am choosing Hong Kong to further my study... (view)
Thu 12 Dec, 2013 09:44 pm - Here's the update from the last one :)
I have always been interested in the business world. I am choosing Hong Kong to further my study because my family has a business here. Since young,... (view)
Thu 12 Dec, 2013 09:28 pm - Thank you very much gungasnake. I really appreciate your help for this personal statement. If I were to be admitted in HKU, the next time you came to Hong Kong make sure to contact me by my email... (view)
Thu 12 Dec, 2013 09:24 pm - Here's my last rewrite :)
My name is Jeffry and I am an Indonesian. I have always been interested in the business world. I am choosing Hong Kong to further my study because my family has a... (view)
Thu 12 Dec, 2013 08:05 am - Hi everyone, below is my personal statement to HKU. Please help me to check, are my grammar and the use of words correct ? Any comments or feedback are welcome!
My name is Jeffry and I am an... (view)
Thu 12 Dec, 2013 02:26 am - Thank you very much gungasnake for replying. I have made a correction just now. Would you mind to look at it?
Here's my correction :
My name is Jeffry and I am an Indonesian. I have... (view)
Wed 11 Dec, 2013 11:13 am - This is my personal statement to HKU, Is my grammar and the using of words correct? any comments or feedback are welcome!
My name is Jeffry and I am an Indonesian. From an early age I have... (view)
