Thu 5 Oct, 2006 02:40 am - The piece (or pieces) was very well written in my opinion and flowed very very well between the differnet time frames.
The emotion that I felt most evidently throughout it was anger at the girl... (view)
Thu 5 Oct, 2006 02:26 am - Eagle flying ever high,
Bird with power that rules the sky,
No other bird will attempt to take,
The power for their own lifes sake.
Power (view)
Thu 5 Oct, 2006 02:18 am - Sure.
Actually having read it through again this time more slowly I have realised that although this may seem like a attempt to get out of explaining what I meant that it does flow smoothly and... (view)
Wed 4 Oct, 2006 05:24 am - It was pretty good though could be aquite hard to follow in places also I thought these lines made no sense.
[quote]"Mister, should you tell me how to go to the fair?" [/quote]... (view)
Wed 4 Oct, 2006 05:10 am - hey people I'm new here but I would like to get into writing and was wondering if you could look over soemthing I have just written and see what you think.
Thanks... (view)
