I hate the war!!!

I also hate war. When you write "the war," it seems to refer to a specific war. You should not write "the war" unless you are talking about a specific war, and the people who are going to read what you write know which war you are referring to. In what you have written, you are talking about war in general. So don't write "the war," just write "war."

Re: I hate the war!!!
This is how i would re-write your paragraph to make it correct in English:

I don't know why war never ends. We are all God's children, why do we always fight each other? All of us have only one world, why can't we get along well with each other? We need peace. We should hate war. I hate war very much.

Re: I hate the war!!!


You are earning your GURU stripes.

I have to wipe a tear away :wink:

Once I witnessed my friend and her sister arguing over a pair of socks. When seing the extremes they were willing to go to over something as trivial as a pair of socks, I have no trouble understanding why there is war in the world.

Thanks!
Setanta:
thank you for your correcting my mistakes!

You are welcome, Whitesnow, and i hope that you continue to study English, and continue to make progress.