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Sat 15 Jun, 2024 02:39 am
Hello! I just want to ask you guys if there is something wrong with my example below. If so, what are your recommendations on how to make it better? Thanks in advance!
You know what made me sad? It's the fact that I never thought about leaving you or anything remotely close to it, only to find out that it's the opposite for you. It's sad how easily you can think of leaving me when I never even thought of it.
@Rox111,
It's redundant. I would have phrased it so:
"You know what made me sad? It's how easily you can think of leaving me when I never even thought of leaving you."
Oops... It was pointed out that the sentence is in the past tense.
So maybe better like this:
"You know what made me sad? It was how easily you could think of leaving me when I never thought of leaving you."
And ... fewer words are best.
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