Reply Tue 5 Jul, 2005 11:12 pm
fuc* goin insane i already am seeing seven phyciatrists godamn slit your wrist hit your kidney make you piss blood you kiddin me suddenly you wanna talk about being real i dont steal rhmyes its mine every time heavy lines your mind cant contimplate i degrate desigrate decimate you i dont like you i hate you wait who is this disses is my buisness
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neologist
 
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Reply Wed 6 Jul, 2005 09:51 pm
Having a bad day, professor?
scrapz
 
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Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2005 01:26 pm
iit was set-up s0 basiic I diidnt wanna read iit but I diid and it was iight ya jus g0tta w0rk 0n a set up
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neologist
 
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Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2005 01:37 pm
huh?
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scrapz
 
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Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2005 02:21 pm
hiis structure was basiic and iit c0uld have been betta
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neologist
 
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Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2005 06:03 pm
There is a lot to be said for traditional grammar and spelling. Foremost is the ability to be universally understood.
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scrapz
 
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Reply Mon 18 Jul, 2005 11:38 pm
So the way I choose to spell bothers you? Well i apologize for being original and different you fashionista hipster.

y0u g0n' have ta deal wiit iit FamZ iight g0t pr0lems scream at da kid un0
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neologist
 
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Reply Tue 19 Jul, 2005 09:06 am
I can choose not to read.
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scrapz
 
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Reply Tue 19 Jul, 2005 03:48 pm
den d0 s0 iinstead 0f biitch'n feel dat
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Dusty42
 
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Reply Tue 19 Jul, 2005 10:25 pm
I fail to grasp the purpose, point and general reasoning behind the piece. I feel that you could take the form somewhere, but the message is lacking.

Scrapz, no one's going to take you seriously if you can't just type in a reasonably normal way. Nothing wrong with different, but we can't appreciate what we can't understand. Furthermore I read the double ii like a stutter; it makes me think you're six years old or, alternatively, retarded.
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scrapz
 
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Reply Wed 20 Jul, 2005 03:00 am
cant understand me huh? den d0nt read wat I wriite plaiin and siimple
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flushd
 
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Reply Fri 29 Jul, 2005 12:03 am
Laughing well said Dusty. If you're not retarded, you don't want to come across that way.

I like free association as much as anybody, but sometimes it gets to the point where no one but the person who wrote it understands.

I could understand this piece, but it needs some more work. It's as much of a rant as anything. " I'm pissed off and struggling to show you how pissed off I am!"

There is lots of value in exploring different ways of saying things, but don't forget to learn the basics.
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puffthemajicdragonallday
 
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Reply Fri 29 Jul, 2005 03:14 am
Re: this ****
theprofessor wrote:
fuc* goin insane i already am seeing seven phyciatrists godamn slit your wrist hit your kidney make you piss blood you kiddin me suddenly you wanna talk about being real i dont steal rhmyes its mine every time heavy lines your mind cant contimplate i degrate desigrate decimate you i dont like you i hate you wait who is this disses is my buisness


do you steal from eminem? yes you do.
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theprofessor
 
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Reply Tue 2 Aug, 2005 07:14 pm
no i write all my own lyrics i hate biters
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Endymion
 
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Reply Sat 13 Aug, 2005 04:59 am
Hi Professor,
You didn't reply to me on the rap thread - so I thought I'd try here. What did you think of my first attempt at rap? Go on I can take it...

You angry? --So Spit

I see you people are elitist...don't go where the heat is
don't show nothing realist... just spit out imperialist...
smack down one another n spit back at yo brother
n make em take cover...your words make em suffer.
You angry? -- so spit... but on the right ****
You know the world's split...rich men taking a hit.
Whose the real enemy?...not the other MC
Are your words gona free or just spout hypocrisy?
Your rapping is sour...denying the power
to make warmongers cower in this dark hour.
Let some air out your heads n speak up for the deadz
let their words be said...or crawl back to your beds.

I thought it wasn't too bad for a struggling poet. But got no comment off you fellas. Is that because I used capitals and one i? Or what?
punchliner13
 
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Reply Sun 14 Aug, 2005 11:40 pm
yo can any1 put a link of da new site
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theprofessor
 
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Reply Wed 17 Aug, 2005 11:53 pm
ENDYMION


yo i think you have more skill than alot of the others out there you have good topics good triplicates and flow you need to learn wordplay and switch ups other than that i think your shits dope
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Endymion
 
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Reply Thu 18 Aug, 2005 03:48 am
Thanks for answering Professor,
I'd be glad of a bit of tuition here, if you're up for it..
don't wana pick your brains or anything..
but what's a 'switch-up'? (s'cuse my ignorance).
An how bout the words themselves -
is there a rap dictionary available?
Can I make up my own words/spelling?

By the way, saying my shits dope.... Cool man, you just made my day.
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theprofessor
 
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Reply Wed 24 Aug, 2005 11:09 am
you ever hear of a rapper called necro

yea you can make your own words and **** like that

necro doesnt have thrills he has "krills"

and a switch up is in alot of my ryhmes start writeing on the neverending rap battle and i'll teach you all i can

fuc* what kind of professor would i be if i didnt teach


an example of switch ups hmm lets see


throw you in a chokehold pokeholes "till you smoke and the smoke smolders" like bolders im the the coldest noones colder
you'll learn this as you get older


something like that except you use a word in multiple ways well throwing in a variety of other words that rhyme to get the point acrossed


and yea there is a rap dictionary go to google and type in rap dictionary

and im a human dictionary so if you need any help just let me know
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Peti MC
 
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Reply Sat 27 Aug, 2005 08:50 am
Professor if you know so much and if you are as talented as you think you are how come your not famous?
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