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Could someone hear the song I wrote? :)

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lucasmeyer
 
Reply Mon 6 Nov, 2017 09:51 pm
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NmNjIjUS9y0
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Reply Tue 7 Nov, 2017 06:56 am
@lucasmeyer,
Brilliant. Loved it.

I'd reprise the chorus at the end for balance.

Otherwise just adjust the meter, foot and make it rhyme then the tune will carry it.

I also enjoyed your vocals, good luck.



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Reply Tue 7 Nov, 2017 05:55 pm
@ascribbler,
Thank you so much for listening and for your feedback! Smile
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