Poem : Your eyes linger here

Reply Mon 3 Aug, 2015 11:11 am
I see the magic in your eyes...
Alluring the eye to muse steady...
Your eyelashes sob the eye...
With one look wish to cuddled...
I see our moments in your pupils...
Series episode of close friends...
Your eyes linger here...
Kept in heart with a lock...
I query God two things...
Safeguard those beautiful eyes...
To double my days twice...
And write a poem for the two pearls.

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Reply Mon 16 Jan, 2017 07:51 pm
What the **** was that?
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Reply Fri 24 Feb, 2017 10:54 pm
quite interesting ..i love it ...
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Reply Mon 22 Apr, 2019 12:56 pm
My two thumbs up linger here Smile.. Great work
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Denise Winebrenner
Reply Fri 21 May, 2021 08:40 am
I stumbled upon your text by accident and I really liked it. You have very insightful metaphors. I especially liked the moment “With one look wish to cuddled”. This is generally great! I see you wrote this question a long time ago, but I hope you see my comment and are inspired by it. It would be great if you still wrote poetry, I would read your other works.
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The Anointed
Reply Thu 12 Aug, 2021 07:58 pm
Without meter or rhyme, this cannot be called a "POEM'. 'Free Verse yes, but it is never a 'POEM.'
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