Reply Sat 16 Mar, 2013 12:54 am
Let's ruin our lives
with words
not well thought out
when spoken
sounds like a disease
chewing
and spitting
our flesh
'til the bone
is bare
and clean

Let's ruin our lives
tonight
then forget about before
the words
we tasted
forget about the bitter
and sweet
after taste

Let's ruin our lives
once and for all
with the words
which meant nothing
when spoken
but heard as
a mushroom cloud

Let's ruin our lives
tonight
and never speak
at all
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Reply Fri 23 Aug, 2013 05:09 am
@JTG198904,
Nice true but some lives ae ruined more than this.
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Reply Fri 30 Aug, 2013 06:15 am
@JTG198904,
Loved it even I love writing poems.
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