Cemetery Heart (constructive criticism)

Reply Wed 30 Jan, 2013 04:16 am
I feel good about this one, but uncertainty still lingers. Shed some light?

I just played rushing roulette
like art
Picasso paints my eyes uneven

And Salvador Dali
paints my soul
rising from the brain matter
The Pineal Gland
like a masterpiece

Bukowski finds inspiration
and types my thoughts
of a mad man
drunk on the city bus
to whatever

The Scyth
to my neck
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