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I (This is a drunken poem I wrote a while ago)

 
 
Reply Sat 5 Jan, 2013 05:26 am
running in circles
with juvenile thoughts
still aching
through words
adults don't speak
the is one last chapter
one last dark room
to conquer
with out the glory
of a night light

To do this
to shake this
I cannot not cast
a shadow
I must
be a shadow
I must beat the enemy
at it's own game

I write this all not
for entertainment
not for fame
not so a reader
can say "Hey,
now with THIS
I can relate."

I write not for you
but for I
because I cannot afford
a therapist
this is therapy
for I
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Reply Sat 5 Jan, 2013 12:17 pm
@JTG198904,
Lovely contemplation of the true nature of 'self'.
There may be no 'I', in team.. but there is in 'insightful'.

Regards
Dav.
JTG198904
 
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Reply Sun 6 Jan, 2013 02:54 am
@DavJohanis,
Thank you, I think the reason why I didn't post this right away is because I didn't feel strong about, so your comment is much appreciated.
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