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Dialog for a script...I need something between these two phrases...

 
 
MrIVI
 
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Reply Thu 20 Jan, 2011 02:51 am
@JTT,
When the film is a little bit colloquial, but the narrators voice is not. So it's a good call it just doesn't feel like it fits his pattern of speech.
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MrIVI
 
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Reply Thu 20 Jan, 2011 02:54 am
@Butrflynet,
Out of curiosity what website did you find this at. Looks like a pretty decent website for looking up words? And thanks for the ideas. I think I am going to go with some variation of crossing paths because both time prior to this speaking their paths (directions of motion) literally did cross so it seems like it flows nicely.
MrIVI
 
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Reply Thu 20 Jan, 2011 02:57 am
@laughoutlood,
I think everyone might be taking this about too seriously it's not quite worth any self pissing. ;-)

"There she was again..." would work for some narrators, but I hate those narrators. This is much more narrative rather than in the moment.
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Butrflynet
 
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Reply Thu 20 Jan, 2011 04:33 am
@MrIVI,
http://thesaurus.com/browse/encounter
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parados
 
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Reply Thu 20 Jan, 2011 08:07 am
@ossobuco,
Quote:
Of course you can ignore me and have a great hit.


But we better get screen writing credit.... Twisted Evil
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laughoutlood
 
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Reply Thu 20 Jan, 2011 10:21 pm
@MrIVI,
Quote:
two character meet coincidentally for a second time


tell us all about how meeting twice , coincidentally, means "constantly" in the two renditions you proffer
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Old Goat
 
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Reply Fri 21 Jan, 2011 02:42 am
Maybe it was fate or just the fact that we both weighed 240lbs and lumbered down the same narrow alleyway on the way to our favourite Deli, but for some reason Sally and I were constantly bumping into each other.
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PUNKEY
 
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Reply Fri 21 Jan, 2011 07:05 am
For some reason, our paths were always crossing.

or

But there she was again, like the proverbial bad penny.

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