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'At The Singles Bar' (adult content)

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jjorge
 
Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 07:21 am
At the risk of seeming rude,

I gazed at you

...and now protrude,

do you think we could collude?

... nude?

--jjorge
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Merry Andrew
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 11:05 am
@jjorge,
Love it, jjorge.
tycoon
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 11:18 am
Were you engorged, jjorge?
jjorge
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 11:42 am
@tycoon,
My exuberance

led to..

protuberance.


...I could be one of legions,

who she stirred

in 'nether regions'

:-)

edgarblythe
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 12:45 pm
Clever jjorge. Actually better than some oft quoted pieces, such as candy is dandy and I never saw a purple cow.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 04:07 pm
thank you all for the kind words.
tycoon
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 04:17 pm
@jjorge,
If she's made all those connections
Be careful of infections.
jjorge
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 05:53 pm
@tycoon,
Oh no Tycoon! Not her!

... she walks in booty like the night...
Of cloudless climes and starry skies,
her Southern region, round and tight
draws and holds -- DELIGHTS-- my eyes!
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 06:01 pm
@jjorge,
You're good at this, Jj...
jjorge
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 06:15 pm
@ossobuco,
ossobucco

I saw your post listed and clicked on it with a little trepidation -- half expecting a 'rebuke -o'.

Guess that proves it's the naughty boy in me who writes these rhymes! :-)

Your friend, jjorge


ossobuco
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 06:18 pm
@jjorge,
No rebuke from me, are you kidding?

friend osso
ossobuco
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 06:47 pm
@ossobuco,
Does this mean I have to toss some rhymes to prove myself? What a nice idea.
tycoon
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 07:05 pm
@ossobuco,
Well, I've been scratching my head. What rhymes with ossobuco?
ossobuco
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 07:10 pm
@tycoon,
Certainly not ORANGE.
tycoon
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 07:26 pm
@ossobuco,
Joey Buttafuoco? I don't like where that's going.
ossobuco
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 07:41 pm
@tycoon,
Neither do I.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 08:21 pm
@ossobuco,
(after trying to figure what rhymes with ossobuco)

Oy! ossobuco. Such a name!
From a restaurant it came?
I haven't got the slightest glimmer
...why the name of someone's dinner?

it seems your name just has NO RHYME!
(you could try all night and waste your time)
but, though it's not a kosher name,
on second thought... keep it the SAME! ;-)















ossobuco
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 08:34 pm
@Merry Andrew,
She went to town, dressed her best,
fearful of dim light, raucous noise.
Dark room with voices loud, laughter crashing,
A stranger's hello, she looked back,
cold eyes, regained her poise.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 08:44 pm
ossobuco
went to Aculpuco
On a boat in May

Stepped on the beach
And let out a screech
On arrival day
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jjorge
 
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Reply Tue 22 Dec, 2009 09:01 pm
That's a nice one osso!

Edgar, you found a word to rhyme with ossobuco -- I should have known YOU could do it!
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