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I sat upon a hill one day in March....

 
 
Letty
 
Reply Sat 21 Mar, 2009 06:20 am
And heard the footsteps of approaching spring.
Her garments fluttered as the meadow lark
Her voice was like the bluebirds when they sing.

She brought the apple blossoms soft and pink
And water crystal clear as morning dew
She made a shallow pond for deer to drink
And colored all the sky a royal blue

Thanks to those who encouraged me to continue with my original poetry
 
farmerman
 
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Reply Sat 21 Mar, 2009 07:01 am
@Letty,
MArch is like that. I always took March to be a literal name as in
"Get Marching".
MARCH IS FOR SEEING

March is mud time, its my time to see

each hilltop reveal the bones of the valley beneath.

Absent of all color save the red

Where the growing light of the coming season causes

Lifes red blood to course through brittle branches

and soften them in a warming sun.

Even the cold winds now bear a softer edge,

and I see, in a wind whipped branch,

a lone tree swallow , home for good.
Letty
 
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Reply Sat 21 Mar, 2009 07:40 am
@farmerman,
Hmmm. Lost my response to you, farmerman. That was a fantastic response. I especially like "...the bones of the valley beneath...." Had no idea that you were a poet.
Tai Chi
 
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Reply Sat 21 Mar, 2009 07:45 am
Lovely poems, Letty and Farmerman.
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farmerman
 
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Reply Sat 21 Mar, 2009 07:51 am
@Letty,
Im not. I just get this feeling every year about this time. I view early spring like those guys who live in the Adirondacks and see this season as the "unlocking time" when ice cracks on the ponds and red lines the treetops. I love early spring . Frost was my favorite weatherman poet .
wandeljw
 
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Reply Sat 21 Mar, 2009 08:07 am
@Letty,
Great work, Letty and Farmerman! Can I add my spring poem? I wrote this haiku when I was in high school:

The wicked winter leaves
and all nature is reborn
in the soft spring
Letty
 
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Reply Sat 21 Mar, 2009 08:08 am
@farmerman,
It's called inspiration, farmerman.

There is, deep inside of us,
A soul that reflects our verse,

It is not always a blessing,
Not always a curse,

But it signs our name in whatever form
To let us know that we were born
to write.

Tai, thank you for your observation.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 21 Mar, 2009 08:09 am
@wandeljw,
Wow! wandel, fabulous. All sorts of spring surprises today.
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Gelisgesti
 
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Reply Sat 21 Mar, 2009 11:36 am
nature rapt in her majesty
still sleeps in the snow
look quickly or miss them
the things that she grows
like the red strawberry
or the scent of a rose

Letty
 
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Reply Sat 21 Mar, 2009 11:45 am
@Gelisgesti,
Great, Ge...

or the laugh of a lady so long pent inside
or the child's great excitement that once was denied

The man who still guides them
As up hill they go to watch what is left
Of the cold and the snow.
Izzie
 
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Reply Sat 21 Mar, 2009 11:48 am
@Letty,
I think I sat upon your hill today...


lovely words Letty... thanku.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 22 Mar, 2009 08:51 am
Phillip Wylie once wrote of looking over a beautiful valley in springtime: "Damned gaudy view." It was framed as what a writer might say, away from the keyboard.
Laughing
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littlek
 
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Reply Sun 22 Mar, 2009 09:04 am
I'm not a poet either, but as mentioned before spring does inspire. Mind if I add a poem?

All the world waits for the flush of spring.
Buds put a blush on tall branches,
a hint of color in dark dull winter.
Magnolias swell and fuzz,
the first to respond to the changing light.
Below on the thawing ground,
snow drops hang their dewy heads.
And crocusses in warming earth
shout with cheerful color.
All the world waits for the first signs of spring.
Letty
 
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Reply Sun 22 Mar, 2009 09:18 am
@littlek,
Glad that our Izzie sat upon a hill such as ours.

edgar, it depends on the mood of the moment, methinks. Like the humor of it.

littlek, that was beautiful. There is a poet inside us all that comes forth at the moment of change. I especially like the line.
"below on the thawing ground, snowdrops hang their dewey heads"

It is so inspiring to see us resurrect the poetry adventure.
CalamityJane
 
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Reply Sun 22 Mar, 2009 09:49 am
@Letty,
Beautiful Miss Letty. Funny that you're addressing spring as a "she" -
in German it's a "he". I like spring being female, much more suitable Very Happy

Very good poems everyone. Spring inspired many poets to produce
great everlasting poems.
Letty
 
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Reply Sun 22 Mar, 2009 02:46 pm
@CalamityJane,
I never thought of the season of spring any other way, C.J. Perhaps it is the MARCH idea that lends the allusion to the male of the species.

Imagery is the thing, and somehow, I cannot picture a man tip toing through the remnants of snow in the valley below. (maybe the tulips. Razz )
farmerman
 
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Reply Sun 22 Mar, 2009 03:06 pm
@Letty,
One of my favorite poems about "mud season" by Robert Frost
Quote:





TWO TRAMPS IN MUD TIME

Out of the mud two strangers came
And caught me splitting wood in the yard,
And one of them put me off my aim
By hailing cheerily "Hit them hard!"
I knew pretty well why he had dropped behind
And let the other go on a way.
I knew pretty well what he had in mind:
He wanted to take my job for pay.

Good blocks of oak it was I split,
As large around as the chopping block;
And every piece I squarely hit
Fell splinterless as a cloven rock.
The blows that a life of self-control
Spares to strike for the common good,
That day, giving a loose my soul,
I spent on the unimportant wood.

The sun was warm but the wind was chill.
You know how it is with an April day
When the sun is out and the wind is still,
You're one month on in the middle of May.
But if you so much as dare to speak,
A cloud comes over the sunlit arch,
A wind comes off a frozen peak,
And you're two months back in the middle of March.

A bluebird comes tenderly up to alight
And turns to the wind to unruffle a plume,
His song so pitched as not to excite
A single flower as yet to bloom.
It is snowing a flake; and he half knew
Winter was only playing possum.
Except in color he isn't blue,
But he wouldn't advise a thing to blossom.

The water for which we may have to look
In summertime with a witching wand,
In every wheelrut's now a brook,
In every print of a hoof a pond.
Be glad of water, but don't forget
The lurking frost in the earth beneath
That will steal forth after the sun is set
And show on the water its crystal teeth.

The time when most I loved my task
The two must make me love it more
By coming with what they came to ask.
You'd think I never had felt before
The weight of an ax-head poised aloft,
The grip of earth on outspread feet,
The life of muscles rocking soft
And smooth and moist in vernal heat.

Out of the wood two hulking tramps
(From sleeping God knows where last night,
But not long since in the lumber camps).
They thought all chopping was theirs of right.
Men of the woods and lumberjacks,
The judged me by their appropriate tool.
Except as a fellow handled an ax
They had no way of knowing a fool.

Nothing on either side was said.
They knew they had but to stay their stay
And all their logic would fill my head:
As that I had no right to play
With what was another man's work for gain.
My right might be love but theirs was need.
And where the two exist in twain
Theirs was the better right--agreed.

But yield who will to their separation,
My object in living is to unite
My avocation and my vocation
As my two eyes make one in sight.
Only where love and need are one,
And the work is play for mortal stakes,
Is the deed ever really done
For Heaven and the future's sakes.



Ive read that poem a gazillion times and always find something new to interest me for a while. Im mulling over the concept of uniting my vocation and avocation. I guess Im lucky in that Ive never ever given that a thought, It just happened. Like drawing comic books.
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littlek
 
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Reply Sun 22 Mar, 2009 04:30 pm
I feel like heaving a big happy sigh..... in fact I will. That's feels good. Thanks all!
Letty
 
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Reply Sun 22 Mar, 2009 05:18 pm
@littlek,
Please heave that happy sigh, littlek. (that sounds like the beginning of a great original poem)

Love Two Tramps in Mud Time, farmerman. Like e.e.cummings poem as well about muddlelucious.

Found this by an unknown author.

Never Mind, March

Never mind, March, we know
When you blow
You're not really mad
Or angry or bad;
You're only blowing the winter away
To get the world ready for April and May.
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Kara
 
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Reply Thu 25 Jun, 2009 09:56 am
Letty, I just found this thread. Your poem about March is evocative, a lovely exercise.

For some reason, when I read the first line, my memory pinged the first line of Ozymandias. Odd. The two poems could not be more different.

I haven't attempted much poetry for years, so I'll just listen.



 

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