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Tomorrow Soctober - original writing

 
 
Reply Tue 30 Sep, 2008 05:18 pm
Tomorrow Soctober
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tomorrow
soctober

i didn't want it to show
didn't want it to happen
the summer srunning away
chased by cloud sof winter

oh do linger
my dear september
my life sfirst chapter start
swith you

shadow sin winter
creeping longer each year
shade sfrom september
dear dead september



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kickycan
 
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Reply Tue 30 Sep, 2008 07:53 pm
@edgarblythe,
I like it.
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Tue 30 Sep, 2008 07:59 pm
@kickycan,
Thanks, mr can.
Merry Andrew
 
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Reply Tue 30 Sep, 2008 08:31 pm
@edgarblythe,
Yeh, I gave this thread a 'thumbs-up' too.
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Tue 30 Sep, 2008 08:45 pm
@Merry Andrew,
That makes me merry, andrew. Thanks.
theollady
 
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Reply Wed 1 Oct, 2008 04:00 pm
@edgarblythe,
Unique Edgar... very smooth and unusual... (wish I'd thought of that) Confused
I KNEW it would come back LOL....
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Wed 1 Oct, 2008 04:06 pm
@theollady,
Good evening, and thanks. It just came to me, so I had no choice, other than to put it on paper.
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birdieshot27
 
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Reply Sat 20 Dec, 2008 03:15 pm
@edgarblythe,
this one is striking, i love it!!
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spikepipsqueak
 
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Reply Tue 23 Dec, 2008 08:09 pm
@edgarblythe,
I just found this. It is lovely, Edgar.
Izzie
 
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Reply Tue 23 Dec, 2008 08:14 pm
@spikepipsqueak,
<off topic... I so miss seeing you around Spike.... hope all is good in your world hunni. Happy Christmas to you, yours and the chooks.. and all the best for the New Year. Hugs girl. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx)

back on topic
spikepipsqueak
 
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Reply Wed 24 Dec, 2008 07:16 pm
@Izzie,
Further derail.

Thank you Izzie. I was sorry not to see your birthday until it was too late, but I hope it was a ripper. Also that this next year brings you all the happiness you can handle. A good, long hug to you. [/derail]
Izzie
 
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Reply Wed 24 Dec, 2008 07:26 pm
@spikepipsqueak,
[derail....]

thanks hun for all your wishes. So good to see you posting. Happy Happy 25/12 to you.... write often... you write so well. A good long hug back to you my friend. X [/derail]
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