this ****

Having a bad day, professor?

iit was set-up s0 basiic I diidnt wanna read iit but I diid and it was iight ya jus g0tta w0rk 0n a set up

huh?

hiis structure was basiic and iit c0uld have been betta

There is a lot to be said for traditional grammar and spelling. Foremost is the ability to be universally understood.

So the way I choose to spell bothers you? Well i apologize for being original and different you fashionista hipster.

y0u g0n' have ta deal wiit iit FamZ iight g0t pr0lems scream at da kid un0

I can choose not to read.

den d0 s0 iinstead 0f biitch'n feel dat

I fail to grasp the purpose, point and general reasoning behind the piece. I feel that you could take the form somewhere, but the message is lacking.

Scrapz, no one's going to take you seriously if you can't just type in a reasonably normal way. Nothing wrong with different, but we can't appreciate what we can't understand. Furthermore I read the double ii like a stutter; it makes me think you're six years old or, alternatively, retarded.

cant understand me huh? den d0nt read wat I wriite plaiin and siimple

well said Dusty. If you're not retarded, you don't want to come across that way.

I like free association as much as anybody, but sometimes it gets to the point where no one but the person who wrote it understands.

I could understand this piece, but it needs some more work. It's as much of a rant as anything. " I'm pissed off and struggling to show you how pissed off I am!"

There is lots of value in exploring different ways of saying things, but don't forget to learn the basics.

Re: this ****


do you steal from eminem? yes you do.

no i write all my own lyrics i hate biters

Hi Professor,
You didn't reply to me on the rap thread - so I thought I'd try here. What did you think of my first attempt at rap? Go on I can take it...

You angry? --So Spit

I see you people are elitist...don't go where the heat is
don't show nothing realist... just spit out imperialist...
smack down one another n spit back at yo brother
n make em take cover...your words make em suffer.
You angry? -- so spit... but on the right ****
You know the world's split...rich men taking a hit.
Whose the real enemy?...not the other MC
Are your words gona free or just spout hypocrisy?
Your rapping is sour...denying the power
to make warmongers cower in this dark hour.
Let some air out your heads n speak up for the deadz
let their words be said...or crawl back to your beds.

I thought it wasn't too bad for a struggling poet. But got no comment off you fellas. Is that because I used capitals and one i? Or what?

yo can any1 put a link of da new site

ENDYMION


yo i think you have more skill than alot of the others out there you have good topics good triplicates and flow you need to learn wordplay and switch ups other than that i think your shits dope

Thanks for answering Professor,
I'd be glad of a bit of tuition here, if you're up for it..
don't wana pick your brains or anything..
but what's a 'switch-up'? (s'cuse my ignorance).
An how bout the words themselves -
is there a rap dictionary available?
Can I make up my own words/spelling?

By the way, saying my shits dope.... man, you just made my day.

you ever hear of a rapper called necro

yea you can make your own words and **** like that

necro doesnt have thrills he has "krills"

and a switch up is in alot of my ryhmes start writeing on the neverending rap battle and i'll teach you all i can

fuc* what kind of professor would i be if i didnt teach


an example of switch ups hmm lets see


throw you in a chokehold pokeholes "till you smoke and the smoke smolders" like bolders im the the coldest noones colder
you'll learn this as you get older


something like that except you use a word in multiple ways well throwing in a variety of other words that rhyme to get the point acrossed


and yea there is a rap dictionary go to google and type in rap dictionary

and im a human dictionary so if you need any help just let me know

Professor if you know so much and if you are as talented as you think you are how come your not famous?