Sat 4 Mar, 2006 12:53 am - I have written a story, and posted it twice now, but yet no one except me has even viewed it. I would like feedback on the story, but how am I suposed to get it if no one will view it? (view)
Sat 4 Mar, 2006 12:44 am - Dear Mame, what can I say,
About your comments sent away-
Your lips are bright,
And scarlett red,
Focused upon the unsaid.
Not much left besides the poems
Of left over emotion dropped in... (view)
Sat 4 Mar, 2006 12:32 am - Its not time that kills me,
But your dreadful soul-
The way you come upon me,
Makes me want to just grow old.
My songs arn't meant for sages,
But yet you still insist,
That i am still... (view)
