Wed 11 Jun, 2003 06:00 pm - u seem to need an awful lot of attention. lol but, ( u said be mean ) i like the flow and tempo of this poem, i also like the feel I got from it. You're quote "the more the... (view)
Sun 1 Jun, 2003 11:04 am - sin necessary? yes. to some. u may be sane, but I'm not ! lol. i'm good, i'm evil. i like to think i lean to the good side, but ...
thanks 4 ur input (view)
Sat 31 May, 2003 12:07 pm - a simple release
can be found
in earthly pleasures.
long gulps of rich wine
wet lips around
dark, round nipples --
time explodes into tiny particles
that dance in the air
and fall to the... (view)
Sat 31 May, 2003 11:01 am - lol
thanks 4 tha replies, it was optimistic for me to wanna see a better future, right? out of my hands, i called on the winds of change... anywayz, lol (view)
Sun 11 May, 2003 09:26 pm - that inspired a fictional character
tombs, shadows, and spearheads
jutting from the soft earth
slick mud
covering the ground in thick clumps
-- a grey fog rolling
like the easy waves of... (view)
Sun 11 May, 2003 04:48 pm - though I don't agree wit' errythang u said, i can't deny ur poem's ability to make me ponder ur point of view... (not 2 mention its commanding style) (view)
Sun 11 May, 2003 04:43 pm - if change forces you to carry, cold wind
embrace us with your icy caress
time has become an idol
remember this, before there's nothing left
we've accepted to compromise
with living... (view)
Sun 11 May, 2003 03:19 pm - from tha mindz of : Evening Star n' tha rebel, Kong
pen flows ink
veigns flow blood
eyes flow tears
life flows from mind and body
spirit flows from time
and the waves to those very... (view)
