Thu 8 Dec, 2005 07:12 pm - Angelique, this is why your poetry is sub-par. You're like a child, shunning anyone who tells you your writing isn't fabulous. Prepare to stay at the same quality level for many years... (view)
Tue 6 Dec, 2005 03:40 pm - When did i ever say it's not credible, or doesn't deserve its own forum? All I said is it's not like the real, live battle rap... (view)
Mon 5 Dec, 2005 03:58 am - Angelique, your writing is so ornery that the message gets lost behind the uneccesary description. Take every poem you wrote and cut it in half. Then cut that in half. It's a good exercise... (view)
Wed 30 Nov, 2005 04:10 am - Good Job
Way to misread a question Agelique, very impressive. Your well-written attack and subsequent sarcastic response must have made you feel real intelligent. I only hope you enjoyed the... (view)
Tue 29 Nov, 2005 08:34 pm - The rest
I could touch it. I knocked on Talia's door and waited in the dreariness, the sky and the world so grey that it was the only color I could remember. She came quickly, her face... (view)
Tue 29 Nov, 2005 08:32 pm - Hey guys, wondering what you all think about this piece I made in my Creative Writing class. It's long, so I hope you all get a chance to read it.
Dedicated to Dale
The dining room... (view)
