Sun 30 Dec, 2007 03:26 am - Shapeless,Sullfish,Roberta,Fresco
Hello guys,
i have taken your advice on board and have tried to connect the piece in more places.i have also tried to add a theme im not sure how succesfully... (view)
Thu 27 Dec, 2007 09:06 am - [QUOTE]Much of what you've written is connected. This needs to be clearer and sharper.
Roberta do you mean that the writing is connected and i have to make this more obvious with a theme?... (view)
Wed 26 Dec, 2007 10:43 am - Idealist
Thanks for the grammar.
What Billy lived I cannot grade.I am trying to say that i can not give a grade for the project that does not incorporate what Billy experienced.I will try... (view)
Wed 26 Dec, 2007 05:28 am - Thanks
I have tried to post on the English forum here and will check if it was succesful.Do you mean i should post on other english forums ? (view)
Wed 26 Dec, 2007 04:34 am - Hello,
My name is Hakan and I desperately need some help from peope who are good at English.This piece is due on the first of Jan and i have put alot of work into it and am at the proofreading... (view)
Wed 26 Dec, 2007 04:20 am - Playful Alchemy
Hello Shapeless and other writers,
I took on your suggestions and have made some changes.I am at the proofreading stage but am still worried about a few things.
1.The quality... (view)
Sat 22 Dec, 2007 04:56 pm - Thanks so much guys you are real lıfe savers.Shapeless your help has been great.I have spent a faır bıt of tıme on thıs my self but my grammar amongst other thıngs... (view)
Sat 22 Dec, 2007 07:12 am - Hi,
My name is Hakan and i am lookng to improve my writing and have decided to see what i can find on the net when i stumbled on your sight.I have written a piece that is due on the 1st of... (view)
