Thu 11 Nov, 2004 04:28 pm - Hey thank you for those who responded. It's a relief for my stuff to been seen by other eyes.
Cav, thank you for your criticism!! I agree, the "arteries" line is pretty... (view)
Thu 11 Nov, 2004 08:47 am - Okay....
In the spirit of open criticism, and since I am imploring you to critique more honestly, I must put myself on the line and present a poem of my own.
And in the spirit of Ginsberg... (view)
Thu 11 Nov, 2004 01:08 am - Wow!!
I had no idea last night when I originally posted that by this afternoon I`d have a stack of replies to sort through. (I`m in Japan...there`s quite the time difference...also to blame for... (view)
Wed 10 Nov, 2004 04:40 am - I don't mean to be a downer to aspiring artists. Art must start somewhere, but most everything written in the first few poetic attempts will be garbage (artistically at least).
But I have... (view)
Fri 22 Oct, 2004 08:34 pm - Hmmm...Okay, as a young poet myself, and having gone through the inevitable stage in highschool trying to tell people about my stress/anxiety whathaveyou through poetry, I just want to offer a few... (view)
Sun 17 Oct, 2004 11:56 pm - Thank you very much guys for your words that have clarified for me. Often I feel the need to boil my mission down to one sentence, or else I forget and become overwhelmed again.
But what does... (view)
Sun 17 Oct, 2004 05:47 am - Recently, I've been struggling with the importance of art - mainly poetry and fiction - in an age where there is so much poverty and suffering around. I know that it is possible to use... (view)
