Fri 12 Dec, 2003 12:28 am - oh my god. i didnt see that i did that. im so stupid... sorry... heres scene 4:
SCENE 4 (Victor's house) Leah, Brad
(Camera zoomed in on a picture of Victor as an infant - Camera... (view)
Fri 12 Dec, 2003 12:05 am - SCENE 8 (Victor's house) Leah, Elias
(Leah is frantically preparing a pre-mixed health shake in the kitchen - some of the shake spills onto the floor.)
Leah: **** Of all the days ... (view)
Thu 11 Dec, 2003 11:40 pm - SCENE 3 (Park) Victor, Elias
(An empty swing is shown in the daylight.)
::Day passes to midday::
(Victor is shown in the swing - Elias enters from behind Victor - He sits down on the... (view)
Thu 11 Dec, 2003 10:47 pm - SCENE 2 (Keri's house) Keri, Catherine
(Camera shows the vacant interior of an old room - Camera zooms in to reveal a picture of a teenaged girl, the only distinctive feature of the room -... (view)
Thu 11 Dec, 2003 10:27 pm - okay, even though no one is responding, i'll post the 1st scene:
SCENE1 (Victor's house) Victor, Leah, Elias
(Audioslave playing in the background - camera on Victor's... (view)
Thu 11 Dec, 2003 10:06 pm - this is my screenplay. it is very important to me, and i only need opinions on it. i want to know how other people feel about it. i submitted it in one of the forums at [i]Edit (Moderator): Link... (view)