Thu 17 Mar, 2005 06:22 am - I am extremely confused. I can't say whether it's good or not, because I am too confused as to what is going on in it. (view)
Wed 16 Mar, 2005 08:32 pm - Wow, that's great. I really like it. While most people like the last line, I think my favourite is:
I can only feel what I cannot leave behind.
I agree with A-glow as well, it's... (view)
Wed 16 Mar, 2005 08:27 pm - I like the idea. The lines
Flowing through the channels,
Of my once formed smiles.
are particularly nice, however the sudden end confuses me a bit as you seem to be writing in verses but... (view)
Wed 16 Mar, 2005 08:18 pm - I just edited. Yeah, my microsoft word always does it, I just changed it as much as possible, but if I missed some, sorry. Hopefully it makes more sence now with appostrophies instead of question... (view)
Wed 16 Mar, 2005 08:03 pm - Hey. I'm new here, so I thought the best way was to dive right in and post something of mine. Anyway, don't really know what to say, but honesty is the best policy so tell me what you... (view)
