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MY FAVORITE POEM

 
 
Reply Fri 25 Jul, 2003 09:39 pm
Sparrow / Dong-ju , Yoon

Bypast autumn garden is the whitest paper.
The house sparrows are studying warmly a letter.

Chirping chirping understand and read though small mouth.
With two weak feet they are practicing a letter.

All through the day they are studying hard a letter
But can`t put in writing except only one letter "chirp".



Ask You / Do-hyun, An

Don`t kick briquet ashes without thinking.
Were you
a hot soul to someone even only onetime?



They are famous Korean poets.
Original poems are super. Laughing ( please understand my english level. Embarrassed )
I translated these poems because I hope to tell you my favorite poems and these are short. Razz
in fact, I have many favorite poem but these are too long. Sad
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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 26 Jul, 2003 10:45 am
Hi, Catelina, and welcome to A2K. I have never read one thing by Korean poets until now. Thanks for posting this one.
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Catelina-9734
 
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Reply Sat 26 Jul, 2003 08:11 pm
thanks Letty. Very Happy

Korea was really really poor.
but high class people was rich.
so sparrow means commen people.
they worked very hard all day but they earned a little.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sat 26 Jul, 2003 10:27 pm
Those are great. I am not familiar with Korean poetry either, but have read some Japanese poetry. My brother married a Japanese woman (just this weekend!) and asked me to write a song for them and sing it. I wrote it in 3 verses of English haiku:

One love, two heartbeats
Two hearts now moving as one
to the end of time

Two lives, now moving
Hand in hand to a future
of their own design

Two souls, one heartbeat
Sound love at the crossroads where
two paths become one

It's not terribly complicated Embarrassed but it was appreciated very much by the bride and groom.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 27 Jul, 2003 07:11 am
Perfect 5-7-5, Cav. and quite good. You ought to post more in the Original Writing category.
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sumac
 
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Reply Sun 27 Jul, 2003 12:15 pm
I also loved the poems, Cat. If you can stand it, please translate some of the longer ones.
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Catelina-9734
 
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Reply Sun 27 Jul, 2003 06:01 pm
thank you sumac. :wink:
I try it!!
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