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Reply Thu 14 Jun, 2007 12:47 am
Hi,

This is my first try. Could you check my scanning in the first stanza (I separated each foot by a vertical line):

Robert Frost - In a Disused Graveyard

x / x / x / x /
The li|ving come | with gra|ssy tread

x / x / x / x /
To read| the grave|stones on | the hill;

x / x / x / x /
The grave|yard draws| the li|ving still,

x / x / x / x /
But ne|ver a|ny more| the dead.



And it's a iambic tetrameter?
is it ok?
Thanks
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Reply Thu 14 Jun, 2007 01:02 am
It's been a long time since I did this, but mostly it seems good, from what I remember, tho I think the second line could also be:

To read the grave stones on the hill
x / x / / x x /

with the third foot / x instead of x/
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Reply Thu 14 Jun, 2007 01:03 am
oh well, it didn't format it the way I was trying to do it: "stones" and "hill" are stressed, "on the" are both unstressed.
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