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Trees In A High Wind

 
 
Miller
 
Reply Fri 7 Jul, 2006 05:46 am
Trees in a high wind

As if the undersides of leaves were fish, and the fish silver
like mist or moon and leaves were moving faster
than your eye could catch. As if something were floating,
rising to the surface, soon to be discovered -
the manes of horses streaming as they galloped
though weed that rippled rising in a green river.
As if the past were leaves and leaving and the still window
were still, and leaves were skin, and your skin younger.
As if your eyes half closed and the slit of light got brighter,
caught in liquid glass, flicking towards amber.
As if this blaze of white on grass were more than clover
and blue an unseen cloud, and cloud already half over -
the whole valley a green sea and the waves churning
and you a child in rough weather shouting louder and louder
as you sail into leaves and come to no land ever.

Susan Wicks

www.therialto.co.uk
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Letty
 
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Reply Fri 7 Jul, 2006 04:31 pm
Miller, I love that. It's what I call an impressionist poem.

This one I like as well:

For Love of Trees

If you sit long enough you can smell
The almond orchard's heady scent of honey,
You can hear oaks mourning the lost babies,
The pines talk of terror in the storm.
You can taste the joy of eighteen inch growth
After a very wet winter.
You can feel the redwood power going straight down.
You can see the patterns of light and dark
In the weaving of the life web.
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Miller
 
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Reply Fri 7 Jul, 2006 08:16 pm
I love that poem too, Letty!
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