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A Poem That's Not About Eating

 
 
Reply Thu 22 May, 2003 04:28 am
A Poem That's Not About Eating

by Carly Sachs

It should be easy
because you're a poet, you say,
sliding the chopsticks
between my thumb and forefinger.
Like this, you say, as you navigate
your noodles.
I try pretending
they're a pen and my plate
is a poem,
but they're wooden
and I'm getting splinters
just thinking about eating
lunch at a sushi bar
where I had to order
in German,
and you say it's alright,
while I slide rice around,
dropping broccoli on its head,
tripping over baby corn,
stabbing peas when I aimed for carrots,
and you laugh at how foreign I am.
You'll get used to it,
you say.
You'll get used to it.
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Reply Tue 8 Jul, 2003 01:28 am
I like this poem.
Here's another "not-about-food".


This Is Just to Say


I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox


and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast


Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold.



William Carlos Williams
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