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Reply Mon 18 Mar, 2024 10:03 am
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice to shorten it:

The permit is valid until 5/29 and an inspector will go to the house tomorrow and leave a note notifying them to keep moving forward and get the final inspection.
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Reply Mon 18 Mar, 2024 11:36 am
@LBrinkmann,
LBrinkmann wrote:

Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice to shorten it:

The permit is valid until 5/29 and an inspector will go to the house tomorrow and leave a note notifying them to keep moving forward and get the final inspection.


The permit is valid until May 29th. Tomorrow an inspector will prompt them for their final inspection.
LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Mon 18 Mar, 2024 11:46 am
@Mame,
Perfect, thank you!
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