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Mon 16 Dec, 2024 12:51 pm
Which paragraph is clearer and a better choice:
I called Judy and she advised that she mailed the checks on Saturday. I’ll let you know when we receive them.
or
I called Judy who advised that she mailed the checks on Saturday. I’ll let you know when we receive them.
Both sentences are clear.
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