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Reply Fri 14 Mar, 2025 10:07 am
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

The email address you have is correct, so I don’t have explanation of why the invoices are still open but I’ll look into this and have an update on payment early next week.
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izzythepush
 
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Reply Sat 15 Mar, 2025 08:46 am
@LBrinkmann,
The sentence is verygood, I would give it a couple of tweaks.

I take it you're the party who hasn't paid invoices, in which case so seems a bit harsh, cause and effect etc.

I would change so to I'm afraid which sounds more culpable and friendly.

Also put a comma after open.

That's it.

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Mame
 
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Reply Sun 16 Mar, 2025 08:51 am
@LBrinkmann,
The email address you have is correct. I will investigate the open invoices issue and report back as soon as possible.
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