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Reply Thu 6 Jul, 2023 09:27 am
Are these sentences clear or is there a better way to condense them to make them clearer:

Attached is a check request approved by our VP. This request is for material only of a garage door totaling $11,200. The vendor is requiring a deposit for this special order that will take over six weeks to arrive.
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Reply Thu 6 Jul, 2023 02:54 pm
@LBrinkmann,
Attached is a check request approved by our VP for the material of a garage door totalling $11,200. The vendor is requiring a deposit for this special order that will take over six weeks to arrive.

Is it important to say how long the garage door will take?
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Reply Thu 6 Jul, 2023 06:10 pm
@Mame,
Yes, for this particular request it's important to say how long it will take. Thanks so much!
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