@LBrinkmann,
LBrinkmann wrote:
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:
I’ve attached additional information from the county’s portal as discussed and appreciate your help so the escrow funds get released once the final inspection passes.
Not really knowing the context, I would say something like:
Attached is the additional information from the company's portal as we discussed. I appreciate your help in getting the escrow funds released.
No need to mention the final inspection because that would be obvious.
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