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Reply Fri 12 May, 2023 12:10 pm
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

I’ve attached additional information from the county’s portal as discussed and appreciate your help so the escrow funds get released once the final inspection passes.
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Reply Fri 12 May, 2023 12:38 pm
@LBrinkmann,
LBrinkmann wrote:

Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

I’ve attached additional information from the county’s portal as discussed and appreciate your help so the escrow funds get released once the final inspection passes.


Not really knowing the context, I would say something like:

Attached is the additional information from the company's portal as we discussed. I appreciate your help in getting the escrow funds released.

No need to mention the final inspection because that would be obvious.
LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Fri 12 May, 2023 12:53 pm
@Mame,
Thank you and Happy Friday!
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bobsal u1553115
 
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Reply Sat 13 May, 2023 06:31 am
@LBrinkmann,
LBrinkmann wrote:

Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

I’ve attached additional information from the county’s portal as discussed and appreciate your help so the escrow funds get released once the final inspection passes.


Here's the link to the county's webste.

Thanks for helping me get this project moving.
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