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Help needed with song lyric? : ) please

 
 
Reply Thu 27 Apr, 2023 02:29 am
Hey everybody!

I am trying to write a song about memories. English is not my native language so I am kind of stuck with this idea.....

I already have the melodie, the chords and the whole structure of the song figured out on guitar and I am quite happy with it..... The verse and pre chorus of the song is very calm and simple but I have a very distinctive chorus melody......It's a kind of call and response thing.

Memories

Verse 1
Summer Days like these… bring a smile to my lips
I don’t want them to end

the sun on my skin
the warm warm wind
how I love this feeling

Pre chours
lifes a a winding road ….. Such a hard way to go

chorus
Memories …. Will guide me

- This is the point where I am stuck at.......I have some ideas but I am not able to finish it..... it put some of my ideas for the second verse of the chorus at the bottom.....maybe you can help me out.... If you need any more information please feel free the write me : )


Ideas for the second line of chorus


And Meldodies … will always give me peace

And good good friends, family and melodies will help you when the world tells you to shut up your mouth

And I am not afraid.....

And I will not change!!!
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izzythepush
 
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Reply Thu 27 Apr, 2023 04:00 am
@Samuel Brauhaus,
You wouldn't say bring a smile to my lips you'd say bring a smile to my face.
Samuel Brauhaus
 
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Reply Thu 27 Apr, 2023 05:12 am
@izzythepush,
Hey izzy!
Thanks a lot!
bobsal u1553115
 
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Reply Thu 27 Apr, 2023 06:11 am
@Samuel Brauhaus,
Not to attempt to guild a lily: "You bring a smile to my face and promise of a kiss to my lips"
Samuel Brauhaus
 
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Reply Thu 27 Apr, 2023 08:09 am
@bobsal u1553115,
Sounds awesome!
Thank you very much!

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The Anointed
 
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Reply Thu 27 Apr, 2023 07:13 pm
@Samuel Brauhaus,
Verse 1
These warm Summer Days… bring a smile to my eyes
Don’t want them to end… don’t want them to die
The warm sun on my skin….the cool scented wind
Bring Memories of days…. of joy with good friends


Pre chours
life’s an ever winding road with God knows what…. behind each bend
But fearlessly I continue on with Memories by me as my friend.

chorus

Melodies, and good friends, will help me face what’s round each bend
I am not afraid…. I carry on…. while in my heart I hear this song
With a melody that gives me peace…. a melody that will not cease
And though the world at times seems strange…I will not fear…I will not change.

Verse 2

The Memories deep down here inside…. Will forever be…. my trusted guide
Memories… of all the wrongs I’ve done, won't crush my soul….They’ll make me strong
The memory of that guilt and pain… and that mistake… I’ll not repeat again
And the love I receive from my family…. Helps wipe away all my tears.


Pre chours
life’s an ever winding road with God knows what…. behind each bend
But fearlessly I continue on with Memories by me as my friend.

chorus

Melodies, and good friends, will help me face what’s round each bend
I am not afraid…. I carry on…. while in my heart I hear this song
With a melody that gives me peace…. a melody that will not cease
And though the world at times seems strange…I will not fear…I will not change.

Do with that as you will.
Samuel Brauhaus
 
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Reply Fri 28 Apr, 2023 05:27 am
@The Anointed,
WOW!!!
This is amazing!
Thank you so much!
Samuel Brauhaus
 
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Reply Fri 28 Apr, 2023 05:30 am
@The Anointed,
I can't thank you enough...thank you so much : )
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bobsal u1553115
 
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Reply Fri 28 Apr, 2023 09:26 am
@Samuel Brauhaus,
Samuel Brauhaus wrote:

WOW!!!
This is amazing!
Thank you so much!



Something anointed hasn't heard very many times.
The Anointed
 
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Reply Fri 28 Apr, 2023 03:28 pm
@bobsal u1553115,
bobsal wrote...... Something anointed hasn't heard very many times.

The Anointed responds...... You'd be surprised old mate, you'd be surprised.
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