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Reply Thu 8 Oct, 2020 01:14 pm
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

Spoke with his wife and discussed that she is happy with the repairs but would like to have the cabinet that isn't level adjusted.
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Reply Thu 8 Oct, 2020 01:40 pm
@LBrinkmann,
Although it can be understood, it is not really a proper sentence.

A more fitting rendition of the sentence, The repairs were discussed with his wife and she is happy for the most part; however, she wants the cabinet that is not level to be adjusted.
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Reply Thu 8 Oct, 2020 01:51 pm
@Sturgis,
Great, thank you!
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