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Reply Wed 22 Jul, 2020 02:57 pm
Which sentence is clearer and a better choice:

Lisa with the city advised that a contractor's license is required and she will email the application to me.
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Lisa with the city advised that a contractor's license is required and that she will email the application to me.
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Reply Wed 22 Jul, 2020 03:01 pm
@LBrinkmann,
Both are clear; however, I would select the second sentence. It runs more smoothly with the inclusion of 'that'.
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Reply Wed 22 Jul, 2020 03:17 pm
@Sturgis,
Thank you!
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