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Reply Wed 18 Mar, 2020 06:52 am
Which sentence is clearer and a better choice:

We have a crane reserved on Monday to remove the existing roof and to install the new trusses.

or

We have a crane reserved on Monday to remove the existing roof and install the new trusses.

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Reply Wed 18 Mar, 2020 07:14 am
@LBrinkmann,
I'd opt for the second.

Additionally, I would rewrite to reserved for Monday.
LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Wed 18 Mar, 2020 07:31 am
@Sturgis,
Thank you!
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