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Tue 10 Mar, 2020 12:53 pm
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice?
Michael said that his co-worker contacted customer yesterday and was told that she is unhappy with the drywall and that the texture doesn't match the original.
@LBrinkmann,
Although the sentence is clear, it would run more smoothly as follows:
Michael said his co-worker contacted the customer yesterday and was told she is unhappy with the drywall and that the texture does not match the original.
"customer"
should be
"the customer"
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