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Reply Thu 27 Feb, 2020 11:09 am
Is this sentence clear or is there a better choice:

We have been unable to contact you about moving forward with your project and are asking that you contact us with what your intentions are in having the project completed.
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Sturgis
 
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Reply Thu 27 Feb, 2020 01:48 pm
@LBrinkmann,
While the sentence is clear, there are moments of repetitiveness.

A more concise presentation: We have been unable to contact you about moving forward with your project. Please contact us, as to your intentions of having the project completed.
LBrinkmann
 
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Reply Thu 27 Feb, 2020 01:50 pm
@Sturgis,
Thank you!
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Glennn
 
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Reply Thu 27 Feb, 2020 03:56 pm
We have been unable to contact you. Please contact us regarding the completion of your project.
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