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Which sentence is correct?

 
 
Reply Thu 6 Feb, 2020 10:26 pm
Boxing no doubt offered Bruce Lee a challenge. As it did to Gary Elms.

Boxing no doubt offered Bruce Lee a challenge, as it did to Gary Elms.

Which sentence is more correct?

Thanks.
 
oralloy
 
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Reply Thu 6 Feb, 2020 10:41 pm
I like the comma better than the period.
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tanguatlay
 
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Reply Fri 7 Feb, 2020 07:16 am
Could someone please help?
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hightor
 
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Reply Fri 7 Feb, 2020 07:23 am
They're both correct. The thing is, we'd need to compare them to the way the entire text is written. Separating the thought into two sentences can be a way of imparting a sense of irony which might be effective but we can't judge it in isolation. Context is an important factor which is often left out of usage questions.
Glennn
 
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Reply Fri 7 Feb, 2020 09:54 am
@tanguatlay,
The comma is correct.
engineer
 
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Reply Fri 7 Feb, 2020 12:23 pm
@Glennn,
And Bruce Lee won the fight.
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izzythepush
 
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Reply Fri 7 Feb, 2020 01:38 pm
@tanguatlay,
A good rule of thumb is that a sentence makes sense on its own. Hightor does have a point about style, but in the absence of rhetoric and other devices it's best to look at it as a stand alone sentence.

Boxing no doubt offered Bruce Lee a challenge.

This makes sense on its own. If you read it out of context you still know what's going on.

Boxing no doubt offered Bruce Lee a challenge, as it did to Gary Elms.


This also makes sense on its own.

As it did to Gary Elms.

This makes no sense on its own, it's completely dependent on what precedes it.

Therefore, Boxing no doubt offered Bruce Lee a challenge, as it did to Gary Elms. is correct.
bobsal u1553115
 
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Reply Sat 8 Feb, 2020 09:30 am
Which sentence is more correct?

Shouldn't that be "more correcteror"?
Glennn
 
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Reply Sun 9 Feb, 2020 09:06 am
@bobsal u1553115,
No. It should be: Which sentence is the most correctest.
oralloy
 
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Reply Sun 9 Feb, 2020 09:16 am
"Which sentence is correct?" was fine.

"Which sentence is more correct?" was fine.

"Which sentence is the most correct?" would be fine too.

"Which sentence is the correctest?" sounds a little strange to me, but I don't know if it is wrong or not.
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Glennn
 
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Reply Sun 9 Feb, 2020 09:47 am
Well I think bobsal was having fun with the word "correcteror." So I followed suit and joined in the fun with my own non-word.

bobsal u1553115
 
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Reply Sun 9 Feb, 2020 09:48 am
@Glennn,
I have so much trouble with the past pluperfect.
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oralloy
 
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Reply Sun 9 Feb, 2020 10:17 am
@Glennn,
Glennn wrote:
Well I think bobsal was having fun with the word "correcteror." So I followed suit and joined in the fun with my own non-word.

This is a thread where an English learner is looking for advice on how to speak the English language though.

I think that "correctest" is actually a real word. Although off hand I can't give any advice on proper usage of the word.
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tanguatlay
 
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Reply Sun 9 Feb, 2020 08:18 pm
@hightor,
hightor wrote:

They're both correct. The thing is, we'd need to compare them to the way the entire text is written. Separating the thought into two sentences can be a way of imparting a sense of irony which might be effective but we can't judge it in isolation. Context is an important factor which is often left out of usage questions.

Many thanks, hightor!
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tanguatlay
 
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Reply Sun 9 Feb, 2020 08:19 pm
@Glennn,
Thanks, Glennn.
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tanguatlay
 
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Reply Sun 9 Feb, 2020 08:30 pm
@izzythepush,
izzythepush wrote:

A good rule of thumb is that a sentence makes sense on its own. Hightor does have a point about style, but in the absence of rhetoric and other devices it's best to look at it as a stand alone sentence.

Boxing no doubt offered Bruce Lee a challenge.

This makes sense on its own. If you read it out of context you still know what's going on.

Boxing no doubt offered Bruce Lee a challenge, as it did to Gary Elms.


This also makes sense on its own.
Many thanks, izzythepush!

As it did to Gary Elms.

This makes no sense on its own, it's completely dependent on what precedes it.

Therefore, Boxing no doubt offered Bruce Lee a challenge, as it did to Gary Elms. is correct.
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tanguatlay
 
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Reply Sun 9 Feb, 2020 08:34 pm
Many thanks to all of you who gave helpful replies!
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Osibos
 
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Reply Sat 15 Feb, 2020 05:59 pm
@tanguatlay,
Sentence two has better grammar than sentence one. "As it did to Gary Elms" is incomplete with no direct verb.
bobsal u1553115
 
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Reply Tue 18 Feb, 2020 12:26 pm
@tanguatlay,
The second flows better. The first introduces BL then just drops GE on us, whereas the second ties them together.
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bobsal u1553115
 
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Reply Tue 18 Feb, 2020 12:31 pm
@Osibos,
I don't know what your definition of is is, but is is a verb.
 

 
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