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What would you write?

 
 
Reply Fri 3 Aug, 2018 06:25 am
Hey!

I was wondering that if you guys would have to write a story about a loner boy who likes to be alone and is mysterious and doesn't talk much and a girl who wants to get to know him and his past with little romance (not so many characters) and with a sad ending. What will be your story then or any ideas?

Thanks!
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Sturgis
 
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Reply Fri 3 Aug, 2018 12:07 pm
@Someonesissue,
Surely you jest.

This is quite easy to craft a story for.

You need to assign a name for both the boy and the girl along with particular physical attributes, such as hair color, eye color, height, body build and so on. This will bring them to life. Once they spring to life, your story should flow smoothly.
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Jane15818
 
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Reply Wed 29 Aug, 2018 05:46 am
@Someonesissue,
My story (shortly) - he was lonely, she wanted him, she won after 2 years of misunderstandings game over. Love cannot be forced.
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benrojers
 
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Reply Fri 29 Mar, 2019 02:03 am
@Someonesissue,
I will write rhetorical analysis essay. I do not like to write such hard kind of essays. I found article about it. The rhetorical analysis definition says to apply critical thinking and reading skills to break down and analyze text. The goal is to examine what is implied in the text, rather than what is written. i think i will use some help with writing it
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The Anointed
 
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Reply Sun 15 Aug, 2021 09:57 pm
@Someonesissue,
How many books had the young man read?
Mysterious tales of the living dead
Books of demons and ancient kings
Of magic lanterns and other things

He called up visions of wonderful lands
With their rolling oceans and golden sands
But those visions were only all in his head
His life revolved round stories he’d read

She had known the young man all her life
And had dreamed of the day that she’d be his wife

Would you like to complete the poem yourself, if not, I will continue on with it after I return from picking up the grandson.
The Anointed
 
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Reply Mon 16 Aug, 2021 07:04 pm
@The Anointed,
I was hoping that you might finish the story, BUT? So, I will complete it and claim it.

Here is how I would tell the story.

How many books had the young lad read?
Mysterious tales of the living dead
Books of demons and ancient kings
Of magic lanterns and other things

He called up the visions of far distant lands
With their crystal clear waters and golden sands
But those visions were shadows, merely dreams in his head
For his whole life revolved round those stories he’d read

She stood there beside him grasping his hand
And hoping that this time -- he might, just understand
That the woman beside him, once the love of his life
Was the woman he’d asked -- to one day be his wife

Would the scent of her body, the touch of her hand
Bring back the memories of those nights on the sand
Unmoved by her presence, his eyes fixed on the wall
With severe damaged brain, he could never recall

Tears rolled down her cheek as she kissed him good bye
While whispering these words; “Why darling why?”
Leaving her Partner, after one final hug
She cursed that Last party and curse those damned drugs....The Anointed

The Anointed
 
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Reply Tue 17 Aug, 2021 01:02 am
@The Anointed,
I forgot to look at the date that this thread was first started 3 years ago, my bad.
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