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'The Product of a Fevered Mind'

 
 
jjorge
 
Reply Thu 26 Apr, 2018 08:20 am
You got flu?
Me too!
.
This virus
seeks to expire us!
.
Each sneeze
rattles my knees
.
Each cough
my head blows off
.
Can’t sleep prone
(he says with a groan).

must sleep sitting up
for the cough to shut up
.
So I gobble pills
to cure this ill
.
but it persists
(and yes, I’m pissed)
.
So, you want to know
how do I feel?

Like ‘one foot in the grave,
one on a banana peel,
.
Do I deserve this?
(shouting into my pillows)
.
The answer: "You earned it,
..for your peccadilloes!"
-GL
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Ponderer
 
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Reply Thu 26 Apr, 2018 09:14 am
@jjorge,
I shall stay away from you
Lest I should also get the flu
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Thu 26 Apr, 2018 11:22 am
One flu over the cuckoo

Not you, jjorge. Just a thought
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jjorge
 
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Reply Fri 27 Apr, 2018 07:14 am
@Ponderer,
@ponderer

My point of view:
You could be due ;-)
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