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Reply Fri 9 Mar, 2018 03:31 pm
Is this sentence clear or should additional words be added to reflect three separate delays:
The change in the date is due to the delays that we had waiting for approval of the claim, inclement weather, and the hidden damage with the framing.
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Reply Fri 9 Mar, 2018 05:43 pm
@dabbadabba,
It's perfectly clear. More words would not make it better.
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