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Reply Wed 10 Jan, 2018 11:36 am
Which is clearer:

We are still monitoring the conditions of the roof and the forecast so that we can begin the demo. There needs to be several days of good conditions to complete the demo.
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We are still monitoring the conditions of the roof and the forecast so that we can begin the demo. There needs to be several days of good conditions to complete it.
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Reply Thu 11 Jan, 2018 11:39 am
@dabbadabba,
The second one is clear. The first one is clearer.
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