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Reply Thu 4 Jan, 2018 10:29 am
Which is clearer:

The trusses are ready to be delivered; however, we are having them held until the ice has melted from the roof so that we can begin truss demo.
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The trusses are ready to be delivered; however, we are having them held until the ice has melted from the roof before we can begin truss demo.
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Reply Thu 4 Jan, 2018 03:17 pm
@dabbadabba,
I would go with the first, but neither is wrong or unclear.
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