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x-rusty
 
Reply Sun 12 Dec, 2004 06:26 pm
Quote:
Blues

Those five or six young guys
lunched on the stoop
that oven-hot summer night
whistled me over. Nice
and friendly. So, I stop.
MacDougal or Christopher
Street in chains of light.

A summer festival. Or some
saint's. I wasn't too far from
home, but not too bright
for a nigger, and not too dark.
I figured we were all
one, wop, nigger, jew,
besides, this wasn't Central Park.
I'm coming on too strong? You figure
right! They beat this yellow nigger
black and blue.

Yeah. During all this, scared
on case one used a knife,
I hung my olive-green, just-bought
sports coat on a fire plug.
I did nothing. They fought
each other, really. Life
gives them a few kcks,
that's all. The spades, the spicks.

My face smashed in, my bloddy mug
pouring, my olive-branch jacket saved
from cuts and tears,
I crawled four flights upstairs.
Sprawled in the gutter, I
remember a few watchers waved
loudly, and one kid's mother shouting
like "Jackie" or "Terry,"
"now that's enough!"
It's nothing really.
They don't get enough love.

You know they wouldn't kill
you. Just playing rough,
like young Americans will.
Still it taught me somthing
about love. If it's so tough,
forget it.




OK, i suck at anaylyzing poems but from this what i picked up is:

the author is a victim of racism cuz he was black. he was ganged up by a gang of kids. in the end, when he said "You know they wouldn't kill
you. Just playing rough,
like young Americans will." he still forgives the gang... he doesnt hate them.. he just thinks its normal.


























second one

Quote:



Follower

My father worked with a horse plough,
His shoulders globed like a full sail strung
Between the shafts and the furrow.
The horses strained at his clicking tongue.

An expert. He would set the wing
And fit the bright-pointed sock.
The sod rolled over without breaking.
At the headrig, with a single pluck

Of reins, the sweating team turned round
And back into the land. His eye
Narrowed and angled at the ground,
Mapping the furrow exactly.

I stumbled in his hobnailed wake,
Fell sometimes on the polished sod;
Sometimes he rode me on his back
Dipping and rising to his plod.

I wanted to grow up and plough,
To close one eye, stiffen my arm.
All I ever did was follow
In his broad shadow around the farm.

I was a nuisance, tripping, falling,
Yapping always. But today
It is my father who keeps stumbling
Behind me, and will not go away.



The poem changes tone. In the beginning, it seems like the author admires his father. It seems like he was such a great role model for him ,but in the laststanza, all of sudden, he develops some sort of hatred...

He always wanted to be like his father, but I think ,he has found his true passion and now its his father who's chasing after him.. but ofr what? I dont get why the dad is following the child?

is it cuz the child is now rich and the dad wnts money?
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Letty
 
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Reply Tue 14 Dec, 2004 11:35 am
x-rusty, welcome to A2K. Those are two powerful poems. Wow! You really should cite the author of each, however.

I think you have nailed the essence of the first poem--normalcy.

In the second, think about the awkward child following the strong and capable father and then the reversal of the roles as the father reverts to the child like qualities of old age.
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Scribe
 
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Reply Tue 19 Jul, 2005 05:27 am
No, it is not about money.

When I was young, my father was a God. I big, strong man, always in charge. I was but a child, always getting in the way.

Now I am an adult. Now *I* am the strong one. He is old and frail. He loves me as his son and as a memory of his youth. He is alone, lonely, afraid of loneliness and death, and wants to be with me more than *I* can bear.

He is now the pest to me that I was to him so many years ago.
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Letty
 
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Reply Tue 19 Jul, 2005 05:34 am
Shocked Good heavens! This was a looooogggggg time coming. Welcome to A2K, Scribe. I don't quite understand your "...not about money..." response.
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