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Wed 14 Dec, 2016 07:49 am
Lim was arrested shortly later near Teban Gardens by other police officers.
Is "shortly later" correct?
Thanks.
@tanguatlay,
no.
i would use "a short time later" instead...
@Region Philbis,
Region Philbis wrote:
no.
i would use "a short time later" instead...
I thought of "shortly after". Is it OK?
"shortly later" was the reporter's version.
@tanguatlay,
if you say "shortly after", you also have to indicate what happened before...
"Lim was arrested by police officers near Teban Gardens
shortly after he escaped from prison."
i suppose you could say "shortly thereafter"...
"Lim was arrested by police officers near Teban Gardens
shortly thereafter."
Famous (at least to British school kids of the 1950s) example of a wrong meaning caused by lack of punctuation:
King Charles walked and talked shortly after his head was cut off.
@contrex,
Okay Con, "after" is collo but what's wrong w/ "later"
@dalehileman,
dalehileman wrote:
Okay Con, "after" is collo but what's wrong w/ "later"
I keep forgetting exactly what it is you mean by "collo". You use it a lot. Is it short for "colloquial"? If so you are mistaken.
You can't say "shortly later".
Colloquial means 'informal', slangy', 'dialect', 'not literary' etc. Saying 'shortly after' is perfectly formal and correct.
"Shortly later" is definitely not usual. It’s not unusual to have one adverb modifying another (as in “rather soon” or “relatively later”), but a combination like “shortly later” sounds clunky to our ears.
I think that when people from (say) Singapore, who are ESL learners, come on here asking "can I say this?" they are usually asking about standard English, and it does no good at all to say that non-standard things (that nobody says) are kind of OK really because er, well, why not?
@contrex,
Quote:Colloquial means 'informal', slangy', 'dialect'
True Con but also means 'everyday'
https://www.google.com/?client=safari&channel=mac_bm#channel=mac_bm&q=define+colloquial
Quote:"Shortly later" ...not usual....but ... sounds clunky...
Yea Con, agreed, it does. However is it really wrong
Quote: no good at all to say... non-standard things
Point well taken
@tanguatlay,
Welcome Tang, from me and Con, we love ya